Time: about 6 minutes
Topic: Must be approved by Sandra BEFORE speaking in class!
Visual Aid: 1 required per Textbook standards, with citation
References: Two sources, 2 oral citations minimum
Grading: points evenly distributed over organization, content & delivery.
Points: 100
Order: Grades docked for missing class on sign-up day/time.
Outline: See below, same as midterm PLUS References/oral citations. One copy due to me BEFORE you make the speech. Optional: Early copies emailed to idnasss@yahoo.com for extra input/editing/tips.
Overview: As an audience we will be listening for a new perspective on an old idea OR new information.
Speakers goals: Teaching us something by focusing us adequately, avoiding ‘persuasion,’(should should not be in your thesis/purpose), attempting audience interaction at least once, as well as being appropriate as you explain, instruct demonstrate or describe and ultimately offer the potential of life enrichment to us.
Bottom line: What often makes the difference between a C speech and an A or B? Contagious enthusiasm! Convey how much you care about your topic! (Brydon and Scott 368).
Outline Review: INTRO--attn getter, thesis/purpose, preview mp's, connection, credibility, transition to deeper exploration of mp's in body--BODY--main points 1-3 repeated and explored in depth supported by examples,research,analogies orpersonal experiences and visual aids, transition to conclusion--CONCLUSION--conclusive language, restate thesis, review briefly the main points (tell 'em what u just told 'em!) and end with a BANG!--Alphabetical References list Per APA or MLA (Not spoken, just included for me with the outline)
Also provide feedback for the speaker who goes immediately after you do! (10% of grade!)
For this BLOG, due next WED please let your classmates know what you hope to gain through peer feedback, ie: what would be most helpful to hear from classmates about your speech? Sounds easy, right? Ok, if you want credit, turn it into a RAPor a Rhyme or a Poem! Can be funny or serious, whatever you like! About 5 or 6 sentences ONLY! Email me with any questions on the info speech! idnasss@yahoo.com.
MY RAP
YO YO YO, SANDRAH IN DAH HOWWWSE:
WHEN I GET FEEDBACK I LIKE TO HEAR
SOMETHING GOOD I DON'T WANNA FEEL FEAR
ABOUT MY GRADE CUZ I DON'T WANT IT 2 SUCK
ONCE I MADE A SPEECH ABOUT A LITTLE LOST DUCK
DON'T B 2 HARSH, BREAK IT 2 ME GENTLY
IF I SAID UM 2 MUCH WHILE I WAS ROLLIN' IN MY BENTLEY.......WUUURDDDD
Positive feedback would be nice
ReplyDeleteBut I also want ya'll to keep it real
The only way I can get better
Is by learning how everyone honestly thinks and feels
With that said and done
On Wednesday I shall see everyone, for input
-Kim T.
Hello Everyone
ReplyDeleteTell it like it is, I don’t trip
You got something to say
Then say what you got to say
I ain’t scared
If I make a mistake
I need your feedback to prevent this in the future
So give me all you got and help me become the best speaker
In the world, LOL….!
HEY Hey!! i have a little ryme for you to hear its about a little feedback that you should hear. Im going give it to you straight so you can see what your performance is suppose to be.
ReplyDeleteThe attention getter requires a little enthuasium and after that comes the the big show. You might get a little nervous and sweat a bit but you'll do great this i commit..lol!!
Katrina Harvey
Sistas and Bros,
ReplyDeleteGive me the news flash yo!
I like critique, just don't be bleak
I'll try to be fly, and not supa dry
But be honest, cuz I need to be on it!
Positive comments would also be sweet
Cuz after the speech, I'll be beat!
-Heather B
yo yo wheres my snare?!
ReplyDeletefellow classmates from all around
im hear today to tlk about the sound
of blood pressure that is,
and why your at risk
if u dont believe me
then u might get sick
eating salts and sodium
just to mention
can definitely lead to..
hypertension
its the silent killer known to mankind
eat right and leave the rest behind
now can somebody scream! lol
-frances B
If youre writing my review you best be listenin
ReplyDeleteCuz positive criticizm is what I'm missin
Mistakes in the outline got me trippin
Did too many ums make my flow start slippin?
Give me some help so that next time I'll be gettin
An A.
So whatcha got to say?
I want to listen from my class
ReplyDeletehow my performance can get a good A plus
because listen all my weeknesses
i will have better speeches
Please, give me good feedbacks
it include all negative points
and i will send back
a good happy face to my class
See ya
Juliana Diaz
1,2,3 comment testing 1,2,3 this is the place to be,
ReplyDeleteWhat's up every body, I am Johnny Zhang,
And I am here today to tell what I want from my feedback,
so simple, just like everyone est,
Tell me what to work on and what is good then nothing est...
Johnny Zhang
I'm not good at raps and rhymes but here I go.
ReplyDeleteI want the truth but don't be brusk.
I need some feed back so I don't suck.
Tell me how I did so I can succeede.
Positive incouragement is what I pleade.
So break it down for me I beseech.
Cuz I'll be tired by the end of my speech.
Ok so it's 7 lines and not 6 but they're technically only 5 sentences =P
ReplyDeleteI don't really know what I wanna hear.
Maybe let me know if I'm loud an' clear.
Was I talkin an' walkin'
and rockin' that flair?
Or was I just playin'
Too much with my hair?
All I really ask is that you be fair.
One, Two, Three, Four
ReplyDeleteI’m on Sandra’s speech floor
I’m going to need your assistance
To show my persistence for a better score
‘cause a good grade is what I’m aiming for
The speech thing is rough
But give it to me straight
And communicate
Just don’t be too tough
Check one two - one two - one two three,
ReplyDeleteYo, this is Mary Jo aka MJ
Whenever I give my speech
even if its a little bad just like a sucking leech.
Don't be afraid to correct me
because I take that as constructive learn-NING.
Mary Jo Saelee
im a narrcissistic man with a perfect face
ReplyDeleteI want to hear how my body heats up the place
Charisma isn't the only gift I want aknowledged that night
The ladies start to sweat as they hear my diction just right
Every transition must be clean and simple
i want to hear that they need a cd of my sexy voice from dimple
that im the hottest speaker here and I should strip
that everyone is glad they made the trip
if i don't get the feedback I want this speech
i'll listen extra hard next week to sandra teach
HAHAHAHAHAHA Thomas McDowell
Come together
ReplyDeleteHelp one another
Aint nothin to worry bout
Cause we all got info to give out
Any feedback is great
As long as you dont hate
Ryan Takao
Hey Yo, Hey Yo...
ReplyDeleteI'm in front of the class
I would rather pass
Cuz I don't wanna crash
I would like some positive input
So I can get into it
And pass this class!